The true life misadventures of a couple who try to save their failing marriage and reignite their dull sex life and relationship by daringly moonlighting as an “escort duo” and experiencing the fantasies of others.

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How about something like:

The true life misadventures of a couple who, while trying save their failing marriage, accidentally rediscover the joy of sex in their relationship when they become an 'escort duo' fulfilling the sex fantasies of others. (35 words)

[Notes:
"True life" -- this really happened, folks. Part of the sizzle that sells the steak.

"Misadventures" rather than adventures to suggest the comedy in the premise. More sizzle.

This version attempts to put the spotlight as much on your relationship as the adventures because, for the long haul, it's the relationship chemistry -- more sizzle- between you two that has to carry the story, whether feature film or series.]

fwiw

How about something like:

The true life misadventures of a couple who, while trying save their failing marriage, accidentally rediscover the joy of sex in their relationship when they become an 'escort duo' fulfilling the sex fantasies of others. (35 words)

[Notes:
"True life" -- this really happened, folks. Part of the sizzle that sells the steak.

"Misadventures" rather than adventures to suggest the comedy in the premise. More sizzle.

This version attempts to put the spotlight as much on your relationship as the adventures because, for the long haul, it's the relationship chemistry -- more sizzle- between you two that has to carry the story, whether feature film or series.]

fwiw

Again GREAT advice! I edited the above just to share ONE anecdote...

Furtherless:

While I'm not yet sure as to what the logline should include for your story, I am fairly sure what it should not include. "Changing thousands of lives and saving many marriages along the way." probably ought to be dropped out.

Why? Because it's giving away the ending. A logline should make people wonder how it will all work out, but it should never tell them. Raise an implied question, yes, but don't answer it.

Again, consider, the logline for "Breaking Bad". It would never say how the saga of Walter White is going to play out, like "When a law-abiding chemistry teacher is diagnosed with a fatal cancer, he decides to cook meth to earn enough money to pay for treatment and provide for his family after his death which he succeeds in doing but in the process causes the death of innocent people, loses his soul and all the people he loves."

Furtherless:

While I'm not yet sure as to what the logline should include for your story, I am fairly sure what it should not include. "Changing thousands of lives and saving many marriages along the way." probably ought to be dropped out.

Why? Because it's giving away the ending. A logline should make people wonder how it will all work out, but it should never tell them. Raise an implied question, yes, but don't answer it.

Again, consider, the logline for "Breaking Bad". It would never say how the saga of Walter White is going to play out, like "When a law-abiding chemistry teacher is diagnosed with a fatal cancer, he decides to cook meth to earn enough money to pay for treatment and provide for his family after his death which he succeeds in doing but in the process causes the death of innocent people, loses his soul and all the people he loves."