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Peter and Seth are two people from very different walks of life, a chance meeting and a joint love for music, sends them both on a journey of self discovery.
Not been here for a while but here is the updated logline:
A business man and a drug addict form a close bond after a chance meeting, and a mutual love for music. When their usual mundane lives begin to crumble around them, they begin to rely on each other for guidance as they eventually start chasing their dreams.
Opinions?
I think that sounds better. It peeks my interest now. I think adding that their mediocre lives crumble around them works. But you could still leave in a drug addict and a businessman, instead of two people. At least we would know more about the characters from their occupation.
I think it's definitely an improvement so great job! I'm curious to know what others think.
How about...
"When two people from very different walks of life are brought together through a chance meeting and a mutual love for music, they begin to rely on each other more and more as their usual mediocre lives begin to crumble around them."
