A female terrorist forces the son of the president of the U.S. to help her in finding her sister, Lilith, who was abducted by the U.S. government because of Lilith’s Godly telekinetic powers.

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Finding Lilith

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FFF · Mentor · 8,245 pts

I agree with Nir Shelter.
And a recall of one general rule in loglines: avoid names (like "Lilith").

Reading the original logline I thought of this as a teen movie, so I'd say:

"After her sister is abducted by the government because of her mental powers, a smart girl convinces the U.S president's son to join her in a desperate rescue mission".

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

If her sister has "godly telekenetic powers" how is it possible for anyone to abduct and restrain her against her will?

And why wouldn't the terrorist just hold the son hostage with the threat of execution as a leverage to force the U.S. government to release her sister? Just being the son of the U.S. President doesn't, ipso facto, endow him with the necessary skills and knowledge to help her find her sister.

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

If her sister has "godly telekenetic powers" how is it possible for anyone to abduct and restrain her against her will?

And why wouldn't the terrorist just hold the son hostage with the threat of execution as a leverage to force the U.S. government to release her sister? Just being the son of the U.S. President doesn't, ipso facto, endow him with the necessary skills and knowledge to help her find her sister.