A misanthropic girl and her rebellious friend are constantly looking for thrills to lighten up their dull lives but when she learns her half-sister has supernatural powers, she realizes having a normal life isn’t so bad.

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FFF · Mentor · 8,245 pts

Hello,
is this for a feature lenght movie or a short?
In my opinion this could be a quite accurate synopsis for a short.
As a feature lenght movie, I share the opinions of the previous commenters.
In detail, I'm not confortable with a character who "realize" something: this is 'internal', a logline should focus on the 'external' to attract me.

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

Loglines are about action, the intentional struggle for an objective goal, not about lessons learned which come as an unintended consequence. ? As suggested by Nir Shelter, the ?"Training" option at the top of this ?web page has guidelines for the elements that should go into an industry standard logline.

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

Loglines are about action, the intentional struggle for an objective goal, not about lessons learned which come as an unintended consequence. ? As suggested by Nir Shelter, the ?"Training" option at the top of this ?web page has guidelines for the elements that should go into an industry standard logline.