A newly telepathic psychiatrist takes matters into his own hands when he detects his patient’s increasingly abusive marriage.

Love the idea of a telepathic therapist but I would've played the idea for comedy not for drama but this is very interesting would love to see this as a finished short!

Love the idea of a telepathic therapist but I would've played the idea for comedy not for drama but this is very interesting would love to see this as a finished short!

I used detects because I felt it most clearly described that he deduced it from the use of his powers. The patient keeps the abuse a secret.

Obviously this is just a logline, so I cannot fit the answers to all those questions without making it ridiculously long and wordy.

I forgot to add that bit. The logline should have been:

"A newly telepathic psychiatrist takes matters into his own hands to save his patient when he detects her increasingly abusive marriage."

What is the MC's flaw? What must he overcome in his journey?
Helping a patient is the basic function of a psychiatrist so the logline describes nothing we couldn't already expect. What could make this more interesting is a personal stake or character flaw for the MC to have or overcome.

Hope this helps.