After a punk rock band steals some stuff from the Catholic Church are forced to help a musically gifted street kid make a record for the local christian label

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What Richiev and Nir Shelter said.

And the premise doesn't seem credible, that the court (I presume) would force the miscreants to do something with potential material benefit for a private 3rd party with no legal stake or direct interest in the original offense. Community service, yes -- for the common good -- but not commercial activity to advance the private interests of a single individual.

What Richiev and Nir Shelter said.

And the premise doesn't seem credible, that the court (I presume) would force the miscreants to do something with potential material benefit for a private 3rd party with no legal stake or direct interest in the original offense. Community service, yes -- for the common good -- but not commercial activity to advance the private interests of a single individual.

Hello,
I think there's something good in this logline and it's the irony of a punk band who must work on a christian album. This is precious, and I can imagine there could be an initial resistance to collaborate, then a higher investment when the punks understand that it could be a good album or that their punk attitude doesn't really belong to them. The punks may also not agree betwen them, that's more potential conflict.
Besides, as said in the previous comments, you should make it clear how the punks are forced to work for the christian album. Anyway, I think at the end the christian kid must learn something from the punks and the punks must learn something from the christian kid: everyone must put down his mask. This could work.
Good luck.

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