A Rebellious Saharan Princess, escapes the palace to search for her abducted mother, but discovers she is the key to the survival or enslavement of the world.

by Cobinna · Penpusher · 20 pts 461 views

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What is the ethnic identity of the princess?? Is she northern Saharan (Arabic) or southern Saharan (Black)?

Given the region where you are setting the story, her ethnic identity is no minor detail.? It will be critical in casting and marketing the film. Even if the genre is fantasy.

Just saying.

dogger · Oracle · 88,020 pts

What is the ethnic identity of the princess?? Is she northern Saharan (Arabic) or southern Saharan (Black)?

Given the region where you are setting the story, her ethnic identity is no minor detail.? It will be critical in casting and marketing the film. Even if the genre is fantasy.

Just saying.

Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts

Okay, I see the story a little clearer now.

However, I am unclear as to what the lead character must do?

In your snippets, you tell us what the Dragon King must do to be released from his human body prison, but not what the lead character?must do in order to stop him.

Does she need to find a magic sword? Find a reclusive wizard? Go to an ancient ruin and get an amulet of some sort? This would be an important part of your logline.

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