A renowned FBI agent must stop the world’s most powerful man before he brings the planet to the brink of environmental destruction.

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Babylon

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JanCabal · Wordsmith · 980 pts

I think that there have been billion of movies like that. What makes movie original? Your logline applies for half of a Hollywood adventures.

Who is most renowned agent of the movie world? James Bond. I would try to restrain from this word.

This genre is so profaned that it's very hard to come up with something new. Good luck mate

andrewclau · Wordsmith · 615 pts

What makes the world's most powerful man the world's most powerful man? Is he intellectually powerful? Is he physically powerful? Combination? Does the hero have a flaw which could make it extremely difficult for him to defeat the world's most powerful man?

timmyelliot · Wordsmith · 1,080 pts

I like it so far, but it feels like a situation.

What you wrote, feels like it's just the first scene in your story. You know, an agent is briefed (with the exact words you wrote). What I am missing from the logline is the second part -- the specific mission, such as, infiltrate and assassinate the most powerful man.