(Animated Short) Two competitive drunks awake locked inside the Tower of London, only to get caught in an increasingly loud battle of imaginations about how to steal the crown jewels.

Entirely agree - just got exactly same feedback in the material world - it's just a barroom argument, no stakes, so why should you care?

Thus why changed it to the above to try and increase the stakes. Also edited to include the fact that this is meant to be a short animated feature - my apologies for not being clear.

Sorry SReyes --- whilst commenting it seems your longline changed... Still, it sounds like a Short?...

The problem with this is that I'm only seeing a bar room debate... Worthy of a feature? By 'imagine' do you mean 'pull-off (as, get away with ;) )' ?