A short-tempered aspiring hunter gets her dominant arm torn off after saving a friend and must cope with it if she is to ever become the best in the western world.

Alright. Thanks=)

>>Describing the arm as her dominant arm? doesn't seem essential to the story.

It would make a critical difference if a right-hander lost his right arm and tried to become proficient with his left ( (Try eating or shaving exclusively with your non-dominant hand.) And to complicate matters, his right eye is his "shooting eye" his dominant eye. So I think it's an important story element.

But the story is vague, raises questions rather than provide answers. Like: what's the weapon she hunts with? And what's the visual for being "the best in the western world"? Winning Olympic gold? The specific contest that defines the "best" ought to be identified.

>>Describing the arm as her dominant arm? doesn't seem essential to the story.

It would make a critical difference if a right-hander lost his right arm and tried to become proficient with his left ( (Try eating or shaving exclusively with your non-dominant hand.) And to complicate matters, his right eye is his "shooting eye" his dominant eye. So I think it's an important story element.

But the story is vague, raises questions rather than provide answers. Like: what's the weapon she hunts with? And what's the visual for being "the best in the western world"? Winning Olympic gold? The specific contest that defines the "best" ought to be identified.

It did a fair bit. Thank you.

Thank you=)
Will have to look over that, got something more suitable in mind.

What's an aspiring hunter? I would think you either hunt or you don't.