A socially withdrawn girl creates a fantasy world while riding on the bus and falls in love with the boy who sits across from her, but he takes her places in her head she doesn’t want to face.

What's at stake? You have a girl on a bus day dreaming but is there any possible consequences that could happen? If so I would add it to the logline.

As CraigDGriffigths said. "Doesn't want to face" -- what does that mean? ?The logline needs to clarify the dramatic problem and what she must do about it -- what becomes her objective goal.

As CraigDGriffigths said. "Doesn't want to face" -- what does that mean? ?The logline needs to clarify the dramatic problem and what she must do about it -- what becomes her objective goal.