A trans-woman reflects on key moments in her life as a boy while visiting her home town to exact revenge against the man who had her wrongfully imprisoned.

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Rob_McKenzie · Penpusher · 70 pts

This has Zeitgeist and potential. Suggestion: "When a trans-woman is released from prison she returns to her hometown, triggering memories of?her life?as she?plots her revenge on the man who had her wrongfully convicted."

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

As gokulthedreamer said.

And it seems to me that of more dramatic interest than getting revenge would be events and influences that induced? the transgender woman to go under the knife.?? I'm guessing that's the dramatic substance of? the?"reflections on key moments", but I'm not sure and I shouldn't have to guess. The logline might benefit from?focusing the spotlight on that?facet of the story.?

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

As gokulthedreamer said.

And it seems to me that of more dramatic interest than getting revenge would be events and influences that induced? the transgender woman to go under the knife.?? I'm guessing that's the dramatic substance of? the?"reflections on key moments", but I'm not sure and I shouldn't have to guess. The logline might benefit from?focusing the spotlight on that?facet of the story.?