A wannabe prep girl moves to a new Washington Town far away from home, and will do anything it takes to make it to the top of the social food chain, including murder.

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6 reviews

Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Agreed with the above.

I'll add that many writers often use this same description "...do everything it takes..." to no avail - it adds no detail and therefore is mostly useless in a logline. Best you describe the character as desperate so we can empathise with her desperation, otherwise (as DPG pointed out) it would be hard for the audience to empathise with a killer.

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

I think you are missing the hook. ?The logline needs that one extra thing to grab the reader.

KW · Samurai · 530 pts

Interesting, but I feel we need to know who/what is stopping her from achieving her goal.