A snide vigilante with a super-elastic body is pestered by a reporter who insists that she fight against an emerging evil that is determined to conquer the world.

Better. ?I like that it specifies exactly the McGuffin at stake.

But why would some one with an "ultra-malleable" body be an "executioner" in the 1st place? ? What happened to the ?gymnast? ?That makes more sense; that is, there is logical match between the character's initial role and her defining characteristic.

And what is the trigger event? ?How does she get involved in that assignment to begin with? ?There are so many ways, so many plots, so many conspiracies whereby a super heroine in the making can earn her reputation. ?What hooks her into this assignment? ?What's the cause-and-effect link?

And "becomes a superheroine" ?is superfluous. ?Deliver on how she becomes one in the script proper.

Better. ?I like that it specifies exactly the McGuffin at stake.

But why would some one with an "ultra-malleable" body be an "executioner" in the 1st place? ? What happened to the ?gymnast? ?That makes more sense; that is, there is logical match between the character's initial role and her defining characteristic.

And what is the trigger event? ?How does she get involved in that assignment to begin with? ?There are so many ways, so many plots, so many conspiracies whereby a super heroine in the making can earn her reputation. ?What hooks her into this assignment? ?What's the cause-and-effect link?

And "becomes a superheroine" ?is superfluous. ?Deliver on how she becomes one in the script proper.

An executioner with an ultra-malleable body reluctantly becomes a superheroine to stop the Russian mafia from selling a Cold War nerve agent to a megalomaniac.