A yesteryear superhero with waning superpowers must mend his ways to reclaim lost glory and deliver the doomed planet from the hands of a cunning corporate kingpin.

Agreed, add in an addictive ingredient the corporate bad guy is adding to the food and it's perfect.

The bad guy has grown into power-now, a corporate kingpin- by luring the planet into buying this lifestyle.

How does the "cunning corporate kingpin" figure into a story about fat people? What is the causal relationship?

How does the "cunning corporate kingpin" figure into a story about fat people? What is the causal relationship?

I think that idea works, I like the idea of an over weight culture, the bad guy would be selling the populous the delicious but bad for you products.

Thanks for the feedback, Richiev.

I had thought of this as a satirical comedy on the problems of growing obesity, replete with the tagline- "Eat your Veggies" on an Uncle Sam poster. :)

It is a dystopic planet of overweight food-abusers. Our protagonist is a victim, too.

Eventually, he discovers the cause of his waning superpowers and could attribute it to his unhealthy food habits.

What follows is his quest for glory and mankind's redemption.