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LOGLINE UPDATE #3:
A hip-hop musician contends in a friendly competition between celebrities, over who will collect eight billion fans first and gain enough supernatural power to bring death to every one of their followers.
Is it a black comedy?
I'd suggest the following, shorter:
"Uncovering a conspiracy hidden within the English language, a young musician becomes a star and enters the rich and famous' secret battle for power over the fate of the world's largest fanbase."
Lempicka asks good questions and Richiev's version seems to clarify.? But I'm not sure how many people will lay out $15 for a ticket to watch a protagonist pursue an utterly selfish goal. Is that all that's at stake, his own glory, his own ego gratification?? Am I missing something?
Just saying and asking.
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