After a decade of hunting terrorists. Liam’s new icy adventure to restore an abandoned ski lodge ends up with his former Special forces team having to adapt to being the hunted when they cross paths with a legendary creature known for its winter scream.

Thanks for all the great responses... I've come up with a revised logline:While restoring an abandoned ski-lodge, a group of adrenaline-junkie ex-soldiers take sides in a secret war between a legendary creature and mysterious trappers determined to hunt it into extinction.

>>>After a decade of hunting terrorists.

IOW:? he's retired. All that needs to be said about his backstory in a logline.

>>>to adapt to being the hunted

Vague and reactive, needs to be translated into a clearly defined objective goal.? A protagonist must be proactive.? What is the protagonist's proactive objective goal to deal with this "legendary creature"?

>>>After a decade of hunting terrorists.

IOW:? he's retired. All that needs to be said about his backstory in a logline.

>>>to adapt to being the hunted

Vague and reactive, needs to be translated into a clearly defined objective goal.? A protagonist must be proactive.? What is the protagonist's proactive objective goal to deal with this "legendary creature"?