After a horrific accident, two quarreling lovers are left in a comatose state. Not knowing what had happened they must fall in love once again to be awakened.

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Wilson Chan · Penpusher · 70 pts

Wait. If they're both comatose, how can they do anything at all, let alone falling in love again?
I think it's better if you change it to having amnesia instead, as another poster suggested.

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

If BOTH are comatose, how can they do anything, realize anything to fall in love again and wake up?

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

If BOTH are comatose, how can they do anything, realize anything to fall in love again and wake up?

Dooke Starr · Penpusher · 55 pts

the original concept was only one had amnesia and they didn't realise they wetter in a dream state

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

How about this:

"After a horrific accident two comatose lovers meet in a dream state with no memory and must fall in love again if they're to awaken."

Is there an Antagonist or obstacle besides their amnesia?