I think there is a potentially interesting story in the logline, but it needs clarification and, perhaps, refocusing.
What is the 2nd Act about? ?His trying to escape? ?Or his trying to blend in as an ordinary human after he has escaped?
For my ticket money, what happens after he escapes would be a stronger hook, his struggle to blend in. ?That is, as a result of the experimentation, he's been afflicted with some super flaw or super ability that presents an obstacle to his every being able to blend in an ordinary person.
IOW: what dramatic problem has the failed experiment left indelibly stamped on his psyche and/or physiognomy?
fwiw