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sorry, I reread and saw what you did....that said, I know you can make this more impactful by making it more lean.
After wrongful imprisonment a now free man is still being kept from his family by a shapeshifting droid who uses people for his personal pleasure... (ha ha...you know what I'm saying?)
this is a synopsis, not a logline. Logline's say all of that in one or two sentences :-)
Just a little too much detail, I like the premise, just needs to feel a little more punchy, snappy.
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