After growing up destitute, a young woman must decide between love and mediocrity, or dispassionate opulence.

Hey Naven,

An inciting incident appears to be missing.?What major event happens that makes the MC have to decide between love and mediocrity? If you answer that, a clear antagonist should come naturally, too.

This is more of a theme than a logline, add an antagonist or a ticking clock to add tension.

This is more of a theme than a logline, add an antagonist or a ticking clock to add tension.