After waking from a coma, a young girl with Amnesia searches for clues to her past while battling demonic creatures who stand in the way of her discovering her destiny.

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Fallen Angel

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Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

Richiev:

I like where you're going with the internal journey; she did the right thing -- for the wrong reason. She fulfilling the her job description, nothing more.

But I don't think you need to use flashbacks: just re-create the same subjective problem in her post-amnesiac state-of-mind That is, she has a 2nd chance to learn what she didn't learn earlier, to help with a heart (metaphorically speaking). Perhaps her failure to give a "divine damn" was why her antagonist was able to betray and defeat her earlier.

And,now, in her post-amnesiac situation, she initially recapitulates her earlier failure-flaw. But this time, finally, thanks to the influence of her sidekick she learns to do the right thing for the right reason. When her sidekick's life is at stake: she saves the sidekick character physically; the sidekick character saves her subjectively-spiritually.

fwiw.

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

Richiev:

I like where you're going with the internal journey; she did the right thing -- for the wrong reason. She fulfilling the her job description, nothing more.

But I don't think you need to use flashbacks: just re-create the same subjective problem in her post-amnesiac state-of-mind That is, she has a 2nd chance to learn what she didn't learn earlier, to help with a heart (metaphorically speaking). Perhaps her failure to give a "divine damn" was why her antagonist was able to betray and defeat her earlier.

And,now, in her post-amnesiac situation, she initially recapitulates her earlier failure-flaw. But this time, finally, thanks to the influence of her sidekick she learns to do the right thing for the right reason. When her sidekick's life is at stake: she saves the sidekick character physically; the sidekick character saves her subjectively-spiritually.

fwiw.

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

Good point dpg

Maybe when she was an Angel champion she was battling demons because it was her job but didn't really care much for humans. She was just battling evil because it was evil.

When she gets amnesia and lives among the humans she gets a new perspective. That would be the internal journey of the character.

(Of course that would involve flashbacks which I am not a fan of)