Amid an increasingly deprived and poverty stricken human society, a group of young cows herd together to take down the UK government whose constant bickering and failed policies are corrupting their land and threatening their families lives.

Categories:

More details Hide

Beasts

14 reviews

Tony Edward · Mentor · 4,315 pts

Hi Jessica0703,

This sounds like a cracker -- It grabs me, I want to see it, my kids would want to see it. My only suggestion would be to have a play with "...whose constant bickering and failed policies..." -- I think if there was something the government was doing that was more of a specific threat to them it would make the stakes clearer, as in, you could lose "constant bickering" (although, it does work) and state what the failed policy(ies) is -- really no issue though, just an idea -- and Richiev's take on a potential title (if that's what it is) is pure gold.

Best of luck -- one of the best loglines I've read here in awhile...

Jessica0703 · Penpusher · 35 pts

It would be animated yeh, and a satire, hopefully thats coming across. By blowing them up with methane gas lol but didn't really want to reveal that at this point so left it out of the logline...