An ambitious reporter determined to fast-track her career manipulates a masked vigilante to create her stories.

All great points for me to consider as I go back and rework this logline, especially with the intended direction of my story not coming across effectively. Thanks for your time and comments. It's greatly appreciated.

I think this could be a very interesting story about 2 people who cooperate to advance their own selfish interests with unintended and ever more dangerous consequences.

However, the logline needs a clear statement of her objective goal. ?Why does she want to create more stories? ? Obviously, for fame and fortune, to advance her own career, right?

And there's got to be something in the scheme for the vigilante, too. ?He's got to have a want, a need that she can exploit. ?What is it?

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I think this could be a very interesting story about 2 people who cooperate to advance their own selfish interests with unintended and ever more dangerous consequences.

However, the logline needs a clear statement of her objective goal. ?Why does she want to create more stories? ? Obviously, for fame and fortune, to advance her own career, right?

And there's got to be something in the scheme for the vigilante, too. ?He's got to have a want, a need that she can exploit. ?What is it?

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