An amnesiac who wakes up chained to a table in a mysterious room must uncover why sinister doctors are performing grisly operations on him.

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Tim Aucoin · Penpusher · 245 pts

Thanks for the reviews guys. I haven't been on here for awhile so it's cool to read the feedback. Much appreciated!

Darion · Penpusher · 170 pts

I feel you can achieve an interesting viewpoint here. Having an amnesiac as a starting point immediately caught my attention, yet, the rest seems vague. Try to discover a very peculiar goal about his location, augment the antagonistic factor of his captors and perhaps play a mind game here with the plot. He's an amnesiac, so throw in a higher obstacle in order for him to be able to escape as an addition or sub-plot. You have good grounds here for depth about the installation he's in and twist it with opposites. He must escape by "remembering" a set of 3 codes which comprise a difficult ordeal in itself, worse yet after the trouble to discover them in the first place. Elaborate, tighten and let's see what you can improve on the next round.

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

If I awake chained to the table, my first thought isn't "Why are they doing this" my thought is "I must escape."