An estranged successful movie director and a hotshot film producer must stop a rival Head of Studio from buying out their companies.

Even with a great plot and a solid script, I strongly suggest you move onto your next idea - stay away from Hollywood insider stories, unless you're one, it will not get picked up.

Estranged from who? (or whom, I don't know) ?This maybe lacks some stakes. ?Why would the average person care if some movie company gets bought? ?Is there romance involved? ?Betrayal? ?I would be more likely to root for them if they were maybe down on their luck, but it says they're successful. ?So I find myself not really caring. ?Seems like more of a corporate transaction than anything else.

Also, since studios and production companies are bought and sold all the time -- that's business as usual in show biz --- what is so special about this deal that it MUST this ?be stopped? ?What are the stakes? ?Other than to satisfy ?his ego and satiate his greed, why is the protagonist so keen on thwarting the deal?

And how does being "estranged" work into the plot? ?Estranged in what sense?