After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.

Biltrex,

For your consideration: a metaphor for discussing your logline in terms of its "nucleus" -- core concept.

Using Scott Myers' illuminating metaphor, it seems to me I've been going around and around and around the outer shell of the atom of your story. What I don't understand is the nucleus, the core concept. Distilled to a few words, what do you consider to be the core concept, the nucleus, around which your plot, your logline, revolves?

Biltrex,

For your consideration: a metaphor for discussing your logline in terms of its "nucleus" -- core concept.

Using Scott Myers' illuminating metaphor, it seems to me I've been going around and around and around the outer shell of the atom of your story. What I don't understand is the nucleus, the core concept. Distilled to a few words, what do you consider to be the core concept, the nucleus, around which your plot, your logline, revolves?

Possible Title: Sight Unseen

He has this gift, yes. He doesn't know if anyone else does (and it doesn't come up in the script) In this script that is the only thing that departs from the normal rules. (Though I'm considering pitching this as a pilot to a series, in which case almost certainly he'll come across someone else that is... gifted in some different way).

So, he has some kind of psychic gift? Is this a story where characters and/or situations depart from the normal rules of physics, chemistry, cognition that pertain to the world as we know it?

So, he has some kind of psychic gift? Is this a story where characters and/or situations depart from the normal rules of physics, chemistry, cognition that pertain to the world as we know it?