An inexperienced yet aspiring screenwriter, with an industry record of absolute failure in logline creation must defeat his greatest adversary, himself, and surpass with his last entry the infallible scrutiny of the top tier, professional reviewers of the “Logline.it!” website’s as “A million dollars for The Perfect Logline Contest” deadline draws to a close in one minute.

by Darion · Logliner · 170 pts 754 views

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JUST FOR KICKS ? LOGLINE TEST 01

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Darion · Logliner · 170 pts

Thank you Hullaballo. Most appreciated. I'm trying to get the hang of this. Loglines are more difficult than I had anticipating. Hopefully, I'll perfect one soon. Absolutely grateful for your broad grin. Smile back at ya!

Hullaballoo · Logliner · 155 pts

Love it.
A little long winded and requiring some punctuation to make it read more smoothly, but otherwise it managed to draw out a real lol and a broad grin.
Keep up the good work.

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