An Israeli locksmith entangled in a turf war manipulates Google advertising to build a mobile empire from a call center in his living room.

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Foxtrot25 · Mentor · 8,420 pts

Agree with Fandango,

This is missing so much. It is also too small to be a feature film. Why would an audience care if the Israeli locksmith succeeds or not?

Fandango1980 · Penpusher · 175 pts

Hey Ryan,

Thank you for sharing your logline.
I miss the stakes in this logline.
What if Google refuses to build a mobile empire in his living room?

Thanks,

Aschwin