An out-world war destines a bio-molecular energy, ineffectual in fusion with any previous life form to Planet Earth, where a benevolent and jubilant father-to-be unwittingly absorbs it and must engage in battle with the implacable beings pursuing the power source for galactic dominion.

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DARION: Origin

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Darion · Penpusher · 170 pts

Have to add, that everyone's replies are the collective right answer. I'm learning much.

Darion · Penpusher · 170 pts

Back to rewrite. Again, thanks to all. Great insight as always.

Byron · Penpusher · 80 pts

I have read this a number of times and must say I am no closer to the idea. Richiev hit is spot on.