An outcast teenager teams up with his high school bully to take down the spirit of Al Capone, who has possessed a small Indiana town to rebuild his empire.

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As the others have said. ?The math just doesn't add up in this logline.

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As the others have said. ?The math just doesn't add up in this logline.

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When the regime’s henchmen execute his entire congregation, a grieving priest infiltrates the tyrant’s palace as the new concierge, determined to detonate a bomb on the balcony of the Great Belfry as the tyrant addresses the crowd.

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