BLOODLUST When a peace-loving Hindu man witnesses his brother and girlfriend murdered in a convenience store robbery it triggers one of his past lives as an 8th Century Norse Berserker. Now he must fight to control the bloodlust before it destroys him and more innocent lives.

BLOODLUST

The dormant past life as an 8th Century Norse Berserker is sparked in a modern day peace loving Hindu man after he witnesses his loved ones murdered in a robbery. ?Now he must fight to control the growing bloodlust before it destroys him.

Use Hindi not Hindu man, you already use 'his' so we know it is a male. Lose itemizing who died and perhaps say 'something like the? murder of those he loved' forget the convenience store too, seems a bit stereotypical finding a a Hindi there. Go with 'past memories' instead of lives

I guess that he basically needs to not kill anyone while he is lusting for blood. I dunno.