Can’t find it, can’t fix it, he’s a cop, now he has to fix or he’s done so taking on an unsolved murder, not well-suited for, but it’s tied to his solution only he’s not prepared to face or overcome the haunting truth about himself or her.

by CaptainMayI19pp · Logliner · 405 pts 425 views

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Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

The primary function of a logline is to describe a plot - actions taken towards a goal. The above describes a character but not actions and goals.

Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more details about logline conventions.

Foxtrot25 · Mentor · 8,420 pts

Sorry, but this is not a logline even if read by Yoda on Dagobah.