What's so funny about vicious poachers? Seems to me that having them to add depth comes at the expense of subtracting from the comedy.
What are the actors doing in Africa - what was their original objective goal-- and why would poachers be after them? The logline reads like a coincidental collision; 3 parties go bump in the jungle; hilarity ensues.
Well, maybe it does, but in modern comedy scripts there is usually a thread, a common denominator - theme, MacGuffin, schtick -- something that ties the characters and action together. Is there one?