Desperate to keep her sister out of the drug trade a jaded girl makes one last drug run for her dealer who has set her up for a hit mistakenly suspecting she is a confidential informant.

Craig,

How about describing more about the dealer, instead of just the avg. "her dealer" Why is this guy going to be a handful for the MC to negotiate with?

I am really finished the script. I was interested in getting your opinion on the logline after a professional and ex-development Exe had worked on it. Thanks.

Agreed with nir and dpg, good advice, and to add, I'm more interested in what kind of advice these "podcasts" are giving screenwriters. Not saying it's bad, just wondering if it's worth it to listen to any of it.