After sneaking out to attend the party of the year only to have things go horribly wrong, the straight-laced daughter of the police chief must employ criminal tactics to avoid being caught by the cops.

"Criminal tactics" seems vague. ?What exactly are the "criminal antics" she must engage in to get back home? ?Grand theft auto... assault and battery... murder?

"Criminal tactics" seems vague. ?What exactly are the "criminal antics" she must engage in to get back home? ?Grand theft auto... assault and battery... murder?

I think you need to abandon "have the night go terribly wrong," cause it just doesn't help in any way.

Also, I think the reason most reviews are bland is because your whole log sounds "small." There simply isn't much to say this is a feature-length story, IMO.

Home without being caught, while may sound like a goal and stake for a teenager, it probably isn't enough to warrant adult viewership.

How can you ramp up the stakes here?