Devon Howard has built the best police force in the history of New York City. Now they’re turning on him. Will Howard win the war on crime and lose the troops?

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jbushill · Penpusher · 100 pts

I'm assuming that Devon Howard is chief of police (like the character name btw, not sure needed in logline though). I'm fascinated by the concept. Needs more information to grab me though. Left with lots of questions. Why is he losing the troops? Some indiscretion on his part? Corruption, adultery?? Agree with Karel that you need to state a specific aim rather than just winning the war on crime, which doesn't really mean anything and isn't plausible.
Overall, v interesting concept, needs more specifics.

Karel Segers · Mentor · 2,830 pts

Should never put the name who is Howard a cop..? If so just mention a "cop"