Down on his luck and fed up with his life in general, a black male is stopped by police in search of a suspect that fits his description.

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Tim Aucoin · Penpusher · 245 pts

Needs more story. Why was he stopped? What happened after or before being stopped? This sounds like the?catalyst for the actual story.

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

As noted by others, the logline sets up an inciting incident for a plot, but it doesn't tell us what the plot is.? That is, what must he do, what becomes his objective goal as a result of being pulled over.