Down on his luck and fed up with his life in general, a black male is stopped by police in search of a suspect that fits his description.
Categories: Drama
Categories: Drama
It sound like the oscar winning short film
Needs more story. Why was he stopped? What happened after or before being stopped? This sounds like the?catalyst for the actual story.
As noted by others, the logline sets up an inciting incident for a plot, but it doesn't tell us what the plot is.? That is, what must he do, what becomes his objective goal as a result of being pulled over.