Driven by his father’s envy and murderous past, a Viking prince is pursued by jealous gods and a dark temptress in his quest for redemption.

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Why does the prince need redemption? The logline says his dad is the one with a murderous past, not the prince. The protagonist comes across as the undeserving victim (father's envy and murderous past), not the offender.

The prince seems to be more in need of rescuing than redemption.

dogger · Oracle · 88,020 pts

Why does the prince need redemption? The logline says his dad is the one with a murderous past, not the prince. The protagonist comes across as the undeserving victim (father's envy and murderous past), not the offender.

The prince seems to be more in need of rescuing than redemption.

kjk11 · Wordsmith · 475 pts

Thanks, you made my day. Screenplay is based on the Norse sagas. Do you want to read it?
kjkorberg@gmail.com

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