From professional football player to professional coach he leads the top team to victory and breaks multimillion dollar contracts a long the way.

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Very vague and more of a tag line than logline.

Why does he have to win ??
Whats at stake ??
Why is he breaking multimillion dollar contracts ??
What is the protagonists weakness ??
What obstacles stand in the way of the protagonist ??

Try to include all the unique factors that make this concept stand out from the crowd..

Happy writing :D

Tor

Sweet! Is there a main obstacle that the main character needs to overcome?

the character is reviled in the movie

what is the goal of the story? is it to lead the team to victory? it isn't clear what the stakes that the coach will face

Who leads the top team to victory?

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