In a world where magic is determined by hair color and people with the same magic can temporarily share power, a yellow haired boy longs to be with his kind but discovers they have been divided by war with other magic types. After finally meeting others like him, he finds he can share power permanently and leaves to unite his people.

Ryan

My concern is that in these times of hyper-sensitivity to multiple issues of discrimination on the basis of this or that trait (race,? gender orientation and identity), your premise runs the risk of being misinterpreted.? What is the difference between discrimination, association and tribal conflict on the basis of hair color versus discrimination, association and tribal conflict on the basis of skin color?

Why must the protagonist? organize his kind?? Organize them against whom?? So his? kind can fight Black haired people?? Red heads?

What is your thematic point of organizing people and pitting against others on the basis of their hair color?

Ryan

My concern is that in these times of hyper-sensitivity to multiple issues of discrimination on the basis of this or that trait (race,? gender orientation and identity), your premise runs the risk of being misinterpreted.? What is the difference between discrimination, association and tribal conflict on the basis of hair color versus discrimination, association and tribal conflict on the basis of skin color?

Why must the protagonist? organize his kind?? Organize them against whom?? So his? kind can fight Black haired people?? Red heads?

What is your thematic point of organizing people and pitting against others on the basis of their hair color?

Seemingly explicit in the premise is that discrimination on the basis of hair color is normal, seemingly okay.

Why is discrimination and tribal hostility on the basis of hair color okay in this reel world, when in the real world discrimination and ethnic rivalry on the basis of skin color isn't?

Or is it? Please clarify.