In her online search for ‘Mr. Right,’ a timid computer programmer builds an algorithm that evolves into a rogue Artificial Intelligence—which the government wants to terminate.

Hi byron79,

I like this logline. It's intriguing, it gives an idea where the audience is going and even gives a clear picture of who is the protagonist. What I'm missing is more clarity on who is the antagonist. Government, is too general for me to get a picture who is the protagonist going to appose.

Also I'm missing what are the stakes that are piled on the way of the protagonist. Otherwise, I find it interesting enough to read on.

?The logline sets up a situation for the programmer ?-- and then passes the baton of action from the programmer to the A.I. Who (or what) owns the story? ?And what is it about??

?The logline sets up a situation for the programmer ?-- and then passes the baton of action from the programmer to the A.I. Who (or what) owns the story? ?And what is it about??