In Holocaust death camps, teenage Jewish boy Harles Hosser search for his dream girl Ida, who is Hitler’s daughter- Harles tries to prove her that the love’s existence is—strongly between them with the help from Commandant Hoss, than the infatuation he first had when Ida had to lie to him she was a Jew.

Agreed with the above comments.

You asked Craig what he thinks about the story, but without a clear understanding of the plot the story is hard to gauge. Therefore, the logline needs to be rewritten before it can receive any practical advice.

At 55 words this is too long and cumbersome for a logline. ?Please review the guidelines under "Formula" at the top of the web page for constructing an industry acceptable logline.

At 55 words this is too long and cumbersome for a logline. ?Please review the guidelines under "Formula" at the top of the web page for constructing an industry acceptable logline.