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What Richiev said. The joy ride into the past has to the cause of the present calamity - the inciting incident for the plot -- otherwise what purpose does it serve?
The story could be about ironical intention: the protagonist and his friends just want to have a good time in the past, but --"Doh!" --their joy ride has unintended consequences. Their intervention in the past creates the mess; now they have to figure out a way to clean it up, save the world from their short-sighted folly.
What Richiev said. The joy ride into the past has to the cause of the present calamity - the inciting incident for the plot -- otherwise what purpose does it serve?
The story could be about ironical intention: the protagonist and his friends just want to have a good time in the past, but --"Doh!" --their joy ride has unintended consequences. Their intervention in the past creates the mess; now they have to figure out a way to clean it up, save the world from their short-sighted folly.
Traveling to the past and changing the future for worse is standard fare in science fiction. I would try coming up with a hook that grabs the reader.
An Example:
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"After accidentally sleeping with his great grandmother, a time traveler must destroy the temporal circle he created before the fabric of time is rent asunder and the universe ceases to exist."
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Of course the end of this story would be, he realizes if the universe is to be saved, he must kill himself. :) A happy story!
But that would just be an example
Good luck with your story, find a hook!
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