Inspite of being a professional and personal failure, Sangha is optimist in life but one thing he can’t afford to risk is his innocent lie he told his son that he is a superhero.

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Neer Shelter · Legend · 39,985 pts

Agreed with most of the above comments. He shouldn't be willing to risk the lives of his children just to perpetuate the lie he told them, yet at the same time, he needs a good inciting incident to motivate him to keep up the lie. Is there another version of the story in which he can't tell the police? Perhaps the bad guys threatened to hurt the kids if he notifies the authorities.

Former member · Legend · 114,968 pts

Richiev is spot on.

The logline needs to state a specific inciting incident that forces him to step up and become a real hero instead of a fake one.

dogger · Legend · 87,055 pts

Richiev is spot on.

The logline needs to state a specific inciting incident that forces him to step up and become a real hero instead of a fake one.