“Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors are sent against their will on the internet to spread an elusive virus and must prevent ‘Villains’ of leading the world into a backward of forty years.”

Thank you dpg,

I crush my mind with this and I rewrite.

Hackers "kidnap" and infect famous cartoon characters, now deployed as wildly popular phone apps, with a lethal virus that will bring down the Internet unless their ransom demands are met.

Still awkward, but closer, methinks, to the current state of Internet technology and marketplace.

Hackers "kidnap" and infect famous cartoon characters, now deployed as wildly popular phone apps, with a lethal virus that will bring down the Internet unless their ransom demands are met.

Still awkward, but closer, methinks, to the current state of Internet technology and marketplace.

>> It is a good logline to make a good compelling story

You can find details about this story on my previous post:

"Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors of the forties must struggle to foil the Villains who want to make them spread an elusive virus which threaten the worldwide networks. " (May 30)

Hi pastorim,

Thank you.

I grade it

I found 'despite himself' on http://www.wordreference.com/fren/malgr%C3%A9

I mean 'against their will' or 'in spite of themselves'

The word 'despite', should that be 'disguise' or just what it is? if it is despite, the logline needs to be revisited. It is a good logline to make a good compelling story.