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Good note FFF. Fights make it less passive more active.
I like your rewriting! I wouldn't say "tries to expose", I would say "fights" or "struggles".
"When he discovers the gods on Olympus are not divine, an ex-soldier turned priest vows to take then down; to free mankind from their fraudulent rule."
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