Martin, a perfect square, discovers his divorce and general sense of unhappiness can be linked back to a lack lustre sex life, to help overcome his sexual inadequacies he hires a prostitute.

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>>>proves his real manhood

Hmm.

Consider developing an ironical relationship arc where she comes to appreciate him for what he doesn't appreciate about himself. ?She loves him for what what he is, a perfectly square guy whom she can trust, who can provide her ?with stability and security. ?That's what she wants; that's what she needs. ?Score one for the squares of the world.

IOW: ?Come to find out, he was pursuing the wrong goal.

>>>proves his real manhood

Hmm.

Consider developing an ironical relationship arc where she comes to appreciate him for what he doesn't appreciate about himself. ?She loves him for what what he is, a perfectly square guy whom she can trust, who can provide her ?with stability and security. ?That's what she wants; that's what she needs. ?Score one for the squares of the world.

IOW: ?Come to find out, he was pursuing the wrong goal.

>>>I've checked Netflix

What Netflix, IMDB post to describe movies are called "blurbs" in the industry. ?They are targeted to a different market -- movie viewers. ?Loglines are targeted to the market of movie makers. ?And movie makers ?are primarily interested in the basic plot as outlined in the "Formula" at the top of the web page.

>>finds saving grace in a prostitute

Loglines should state how a story begins -- the inciting incident. ?An ironclad rule is that a logline should never have a spoiler, never give away the ending. ?Even in a general sense.

As to the premise that a crooked whore can redeem a "perfect square", it seems to me that perhaps just the opposite is what needs to happen. ?That perhaps he needs to rescue and redeem her from the cruel, cynical heartless, and spirit crushing trade she is engaged in. ?I would hope the time has arrived when story lines involving prostitutes will do better than resort to the the ?"whore with a golden heart" fantasy-stereotype.

imho

>>>I've checked Netflix

What Netflix, IMDB post to describe movies are called "blurbs" in the industry. ?They are targeted to a different market -- movie viewers. ?Loglines are targeted to the market of movie makers. ?And movie makers ?are primarily interested in the basic plot as outlined in the "Formula" at the top of the web page.

>>finds saving grace in a prostitute

Loglines should state how a story begins -- the inciting incident. ?An ironclad rule is that a logline should never have a spoiler, never give away the ending. ?Even in a general sense.

As to the premise that a crooked whore can redeem a "perfect square", it seems to me that perhaps just the opposite is what needs to happen. ?That perhaps he needs to rescue and redeem her from the cruel, cynical heartless, and spirit crushing trade she is engaged in. ?I would hope the time has arrived when story lines involving prostitutes will do better than resort to the the ?"whore with a golden heart" fantasy-stereotype.

imho

Nir Shelter, I was thinking that she wants to get out of the industry and he has to buy her out.

If you are going to use the term "A perfect square" you should not waste it,
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"When a perfect square enters into a love triangle between his loving wife and a caring prostitute determined to set him free of his inhibitions, a nerdy scientist is determined to get to the lowest common denominator of his problem in order to solve his romantic conundrum."
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Or something like that.

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