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I assume the grieving man's madness is due to the fact he has to care for his stepchild?
Here is another version of the logline you may want to consider:
"A quick-tempered man and his stubborn stepchild must set aside their differences to escape when they find themselves being held hostage inside a deranged psychopath's secluded property".
INTENTION: accept and work together with the boy to escape
OBSTACLE: the psychotic landowner
(The INTENTION and OBSTACLE is the main conflict we're chipping it down to.)
When a psychotic landowner captures a feuding father and stepson, they must work together to escape, before they are killed.
Sounds a lot like an idea I had. I had similar problems. I'll find it for you...