When he learns the one that got away is getting, a man sets about winning her back, with the help of the fiance’s ex, only to fall for her as well.

thedarkhorse:

By all means, take advantage of every resource at your disposal for feedback and brainstorming.? In particular, I suggest seeking out feedback from women, who, after all, are 1/2 the viewing population and can make or break a romance genre movie at the box-office.

thedarkhorse:

By all means, take advantage of every resource at your disposal for feedback and brainstorming.? In particular, I suggest seeking out feedback from women, who, after all, are 1/2 the viewing population and can make or break a romance genre movie at the box-office.

So what's your advice here?

Go in with the original logline or the black sheep one?

TBH - I think I'm at the point where I need to send it to my manager or to get coverage or whatever (and basically get my hand slapped and see what I've done wrong) and then tweak the logline. And then, most likely - rewrite the script.

I suppose that's the nature of the beast... it's never really over.